Revision history for ObjectiveThree


Revision [13687]

Last edited on 2015-01-27 16:46:18 by DilipKanuga
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======Legislative Wrap-Up======----
====Avoid Partisan Language====
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=====Avoid Partisan Language=====


Revision [11676]

Edited on 2014-10-27 09:12:24 by DilipKanuga
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Here, the phrase "tackled the controversial issue" sounds as though PVS has a stance on the issues addressed in that legislature by deeming one as controversial. Instead, to express the same notion, we will let quotes from lawmakers, a strong issue position, and a close vote demonstrate how "controversial" something is, without having to say the word.
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The word "controversy" sounds as though PVS has a stance on the issues addressed in that legislature. Instead, we will let quotes from lawmakers, a strong issue position, and a close vote demonstrate how "controversial" something is, without having to say the word.


Revision [11673]

Edited on 2014-10-27 09:10:12 by DilipKanuga
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The word "controversy" sounds as though PVS has a stance on the issues addressed in that legislature. Instead, we will let quotes from lawmakers, a strong issue position, and a close vote demonstrate how "controversial" something is, without having to say the word.
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The word controversy...


Revision [11651]

The oldest known version of this page was created on 2014-10-24 14:46:58 by MattA
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